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well done and such a beautiful goodbye ...so elegantly done. I am clapping your talent...again.
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Kabu
on July 19, 2013 at 3:34 PM
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Sinome
MPerhaps we go between blocks to love like we miss the breeze on a city street of tall buildings love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on July 19, 2013 at 1:14 PM
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Sinome
Well written! And I'm glad he got the message and that she did find love in the end...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 19, 2013 at 12:39 PM
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Reading this and the explanation reminds me that things work out.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 19, 2013 at 11:17 AM
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Things always have a way of working out for the best, or at least what we think is the best, and with a poem like this, so full of feeling, how could he have been the right man for her, not braving heaven and hell to turn things around.
posted by
UtahJay
on July 19, 2013 at 9:24 AM
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So wonderful... I lived the moments...
posted by
Saif_AlKindi
on July 19, 2013 at 8:56 AM
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