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HBoth bright (first half) and melancholic (second half). Excellent poem love. BC-A, Bill’s R®stA
posted by
BC-A
on August 1, 2013 at 2:05 PM
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You write so beautifully that I believe God will make you one of his special angles, those who paint the sunsets in the sky.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 1, 2013 at 8:54 AM
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Wonderful flow to this, but I picture you rather as a gentle ghost, floating through the house, smiling, with an aura of joy for having been reunited with that elusive love...
posted by
adnohr
on August 1, 2013 at 2:21 AM
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I like the wishes..
posted by
Saif_AlKindi
on August 1, 2013 at 1:10 AM
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If you could wish
for 1 thing to give someone, what would it be ? Something they could cherish alive, or cherish through eternity?
posted by
Raysongs
on July 31, 2013 at 8:22 PM
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I like the flow of the imagery.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 31, 2013 at 7:20 PM
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I have a new dimension for enjoying sunsets and sunrises and Oh I do love an old cemetary too. Friendly Ghost, maybe we will dance together.
posted by
Kabu
on July 31, 2013 at 3:38 PM
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what a beautiful set of wishes ... charming dear 
posted by
Blue_feathers
on July 31, 2013 at 2:55 PM
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