Go to Naut's Occasional Poetry
- Add a comment
- Go to haiku no. 48
so you're jack bremmer. i have heard of your fame. and i stand in awe of you. actually that's a Vineyard worship song. i like your haiku.
posted by
Carolyn_Moe
on March 24, 2014 at 7:38 PM
| link to this | reply
it was okay. actually i didn't get it but i can be so obtuse!
posted by
Carolyn_Moe
on January 15, 2014 at 6:19 PM
| link to this | reply
Shivers go along with that. Good one.
posted by
Justi
on November 23, 2013 at 2:30 PM
| link to this | reply
I'm glad to see that you still write these now and then.
I like Haiku.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 19, 2013 at 10:27 PM
| link to this | reply
Less is more! Wonderful. 
posted by
Dr_JPT
on November 17, 2013 at 12:25 AM
| link to this | reply
I knew when I saw your name that it would be something very good and I was not let down...Beautiful work.
posted by
UtahJay
on November 16, 2013 at 2:31 PM
| link to this | reply
Yes quite thoughful Naut each to his own images I suspect.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 16, 2013 at 11:27 AM
| link to this | reply
Now that is proper Haiku...well done and too long since we had one from you!!!!
posted by
Kabu
on November 16, 2013 at 10:30 AM
| link to this | reply
A great job conveying the images.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 16, 2013 at 9:50 AM
| link to this | reply
Its not easy to say so much with so little but you've done it... Touching and deep. Loved this. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 16, 2013 at 8:05 AM
| link to this | reply