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If love could heal ...if love could bring back if love could ...it would...Lovely work dearest.
posted by
Kabu
on November 22, 2013 at 3:39 PM
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"If" such a word of longing....you used it well in this poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 22, 2013 at 3:12 PM
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I like how you repeat the title throughout the poem. That adds to the emotion the speaker is feeling.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 22, 2013 at 10:58 AM
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Sinome
A love poem of longing and passionate tenderness - just beautiful...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 22, 2013 at 8:58 AM
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Fortunate, Fortunate Man
Whoever he may be, Is the most fortunate man. That an angel would love a man, That she would brush his body with her wings, and lay her sweet self down beside a mere mortal. This is a true miracle!
posted by
ForeverPoet
on November 22, 2013 at 8:03 AM
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It is of course sad and beautiful and the inspiration is hopefully soothing.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 22, 2013 at 2:39 AM
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One of the best poems I have read in some time, you are a star bright with talent. Soon I must slow my posts here on Blogit that I might have time to build my dream, maybe leave for a while, but I will be reading you and other friends...Be well.
posted by
UtahJay
on November 21, 2013 at 11:07 PM
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