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LYNNIE, Thank you for reading and commenting. The "cometh forth"
of course is to add a degree of shakepeare to my amauteur work of poetry, but thanks you for the constructive criticism!
posted by
MountainClimber57
on January 13, 2004 at 7:27 AM
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Use your own authentic language, your own voice, your own way of speaking in poetry. Would you ever say "cometh forth" in conversation?
Blessings, and good luck.
posted by
Lynnie
on January 10, 2004 at 9:58 AM
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