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This conveys so much,Ā almost too intensely troubled to go with my morning coffee...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 6, 2014 at 7:17 AM
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The shadows of life have different shades and emotions that are felt intensely find their way in words.The poem is an intense emotional journey in words.š¹
posted by
shamasehar
on February 5, 2014 at 8:43 PM
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Ā so emotional. i see you are still healing your past
posted by
Annicita
on February 5, 2014 at 3:16 PM
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what a sense of emotional upheaval your words have given me. Thank you.
posted by
Kabu
on February 5, 2014 at 12:48 PM
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You do a great job at touching upon all of the senses in your poetry.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 5, 2014 at 12:44 PM
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CCT
And so is writing about them CCT. Some of us write of fantasies and flowers, the lighter side of life, while others write of the darker side, this is my life, it is real life,Ā it is what I write about, it is my therapy. Steinbeck, and Hemingway both made a pretty good living writing of the darker side of life, and though I am no Steinbeck or Hemingway, it is still what comes out of me...Should I not be true to myself; should I not write about what I know?
posted by
UtahJay
on February 5, 2014 at 12:32 PM
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Regrets seem to surface quite a lot Jay, but you are not responsible for everything. We all have painĀ that will never be resolved. It is a human dilemma.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 5, 2014 at 11:36 AM
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