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Very nicely done, Jay....
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posted by
Rumor
on March 5, 2014 at 2:09 PM
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An impressive poem you got there, Jay...You do a great job at building character.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 5, 2014 at 11:46 AM
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Strange sometimes when we read what we have written Jay we think we are just the same but it is not so. Good poem
posted by
C_C_T
on March 5, 2014 at 11:03 AM
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Utah
Amazing! The sea and the search is the perfect metaphor for that journey into your own self...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 5, 2014 at 10:00 AM
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So this is what started it all... The sea chanty form is nicely done,
the mysterious tone and the imagery are just right to set my imagination going.
posted by
Pat_B
on March 5, 2014 at 4:42 AM
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