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Re: Taps

Some one likes and some one hates. Anyone could do it if they really wanted to.

posted by C_C_T on November 3, 2014 at 12:07 PM | link to this | reply

You put so much into each poem you write.  Fascinating!

posted by TAPS. on November 3, 2014 at 11:02 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Kabu the winner,

posted by C_C_T on November 3, 2014 at 12:14 AM | link to this | reply

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Touch'e a poem for you .

 

                     Nurse .

 

Oh! Dear grandma are you at home?

Can you repair a garden gnome?

The little chap was on the fiddle

He drank his fill and could not tiddle.

 

Alas! at last a heavy frost

Cracked his leg and he has lost

his poise and his ability.

All because of that you see.

 

I did think I'd design a hat.

something large and rather flat.

I think that he has got a crack

A kind of fissure down his back.

 

Please do not think I'm being silly

I know that gnomes can't have a Willy.

Well just encase they do imbibe

in ways I cannot quite describe.

 

I know you work with glues and tack.

You take gnomes in and seal each crack

Perhaps when repaired it might help though

If you would just remove one toe.

The winner,

posted by C_C_T on November 3, 2014 at 12:11 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Wiley

Fragments Bro just fragments.

posted by C_C_T on November 3, 2014 at 12:08 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Naut

Cheers Naut, have a good day.

posted by C_C_T on November 3, 2014 at 12:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Fs

Some can get away with it FS.

posted by C_C_T on November 3, 2014 at 12:06 AM | link to this | reply

CCT

Superb!

posted by Nautikos on November 2, 2014 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

CC

Sentence memories or what Bro?

posted by WileyJohn on November 2, 2014 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

memories....I don't travel far down that road...or if I do I start a long way back. The present is the best.

posted by Kabu on November 2, 2014 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

I like how the stanzas are different sizes. That adds a lot to the flow of your poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 2, 2014 at 3:29 PM | link to this | reply