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wonderful poem
posted by
Annicita
on February 17, 2015 at 12:38 PM
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Very nice
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 17, 2015 at 11:41 AM
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Re: Naut
Thanks Naut, I don't think folk like this sort of poem though. I have become past making an effort I think. The secret is one writes something and then cuts out the stuff that is too banal.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 16, 2015 at 10:19 AM
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CCT
This is one of your many peoms that will endure - but you must make an effort to make it available to a wider public...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 16, 2015 at 9:57 AM
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I think when one can try to explain emotions one is over the pain FS>
posted by
C_C_T
on February 14, 2015 at 11:22 PM
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Yes Taps I think one has to look at it as an experiment that worked quite well most of the time.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 14, 2015 at 11:21 PM
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Well I have got to bundled something together Kabu. Life is not all red roses as you have learned.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 14, 2015 at 11:19 PM
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Re: ChiffChiff
Well Bro if you are going to go all mystic on me perhaps it's my wooden leg.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 14, 2015 at 11:15 PM
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ChiffChiff
I know where that guy is in your poem, he's the tree the lightening hit,he'll heal to celebrate St. Valentine's again, maybe he'll try Gay next time and at least have the word for life Bro.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 14, 2015 at 6:23 PM
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it is a tough thing to keep the love alive for a life time and parting can really hurt even if you are the one who left.
posted by
Kabu
on February 14, 2015 at 5:03 PM
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A good poem for Valentines Day. Even though my own marriage fell apart after many years, I am glad that I experienced it all, as the good far outweighed the sad.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 14, 2015 at 12:35 PM
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I can feel the pain that of which the speaker is feeling in your poem...Hopefully, things improve for him.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 14, 2015 at 10:04 AM
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