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For some reason your haiku has sparked a memory of a long-ago holiday in France... the lake was muddy, the air hot and stifling. I couldn't wait to get back in the car and head home, lol.
posted by
mneme
on June 17, 2015 at 4:34 PM
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You are quite clever Kris, it is not a restful poem, but it stresses naturally into the condition of your awareness.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 17, 2015 at 11:26 AM
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🏨 It’s nice to adjust to summer there love. BC-A’ Bill’s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on June 17, 2015 at 9:25 AM
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yes, the many faces of summer
posted by
Annicita
on June 17, 2015 at 7:25 AM
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I can just feel that hot and sticky summer day thanks to your words.
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posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 17, 2015 at 6:39 AM
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Krisles
Very good! I can never manage more than one at a time, and even that rarely...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 16, 2015 at 7:27 PM
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I enjoyed your Haiku style...very you and my idea is that poetry should be Unique..Like U are.
posted by
Kabu
on June 16, 2015 at 7:12 PM
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VT
I played around with several forms a few years ago, and still do, and I rarely do the "strictly traditional" nature-themed haiku...that would probably truly appeal to you. Â As with most things, I tend to be a rebel and just call it haiku when I use the 5-7-5 syllable format, even stringing together multiple verses. Â I like the simplistic challenge that keeps me more contained....as I tend to go all over the place - as in this comment! Try it and make it your own way, just enjoy.
posted by
Krisles
on June 16, 2015 at 6:24 PM
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You can bet I'm over here looking for pointers. And this type of poetry I would like
to learn.
posted by
Vermont01
on June 16, 2015 at 5:51 PM
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