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That was nice, I liked it.
posted by
Vermont01
on June 18, 2015 at 8:21 PM
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I really liked this... methinks you are more of a poet than you (generally) let on. Lovely, evocative, poignant. xx
posted by
mneme
on June 18, 2015 at 2:34 PM
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Whishing words I drifted through this feeling warmth of summer, sad that winter is coming.
posted by
spiderfly
on June 18, 2015 at 10:13 AM
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Now that's the way a poem should be--making you read it repeatedly to garner all the nuances, to savor the possibilities.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 18, 2015 at 7:33 AM
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A very powerful poem, I find this to be.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 18, 2015 at 6:05 AM
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Do more of this, it is totally great, I love it.
posted by
Justi
on June 17, 2015 at 7:50 PM
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Nautikos
I so absolutely LOVE this! I really wish you would write poetry more often....really, really wish you would. The imagery is so strong I felt I was watching you from a shaded veranda....with questions.
posted by
Krisles
on June 17, 2015 at 3:20 PM
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The pleasure of the late Spring, early Summer of our lives, unfortunately has to be followed by Winter. Well written Naut.
posted by
Kabu
on June 17, 2015 at 12:09 PM
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nice poem naut
posted by
Annicita
on June 17, 2015 at 12:06 PM
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Obviously this poem mean't more to you as memory stirred. Emotional drip feed I guess.
Well written Naut.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 17, 2015 at 11:07 AM
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🏨 As long as the eyes are warm Naut all is well. BC-A’ Bill’s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on June 17, 2015 at 9:11 AM
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