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Sweet and gentle...

and, as ever, wistful.

You seem often to write themes of loving someone more than of being loved. 

posted by Ciel on September 21, 2015 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem :)

posted by EJ_Norris on September 10, 2015 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

Oh, I did so enjoy reading this....there is a freshness, lightness to it that makes me almost want to hum.  Wait!  I just looked up and saw the word "hopefully"....that fits.

posted by Krisles on August 27, 2015 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply

I enjoyed reading this one

posted by Annicita on August 24, 2015 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply

Perfect!

Wording the senses and sensibilities; very nice, C C T! 

posted by Katray2 on August 23, 2015 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Yes OK . You are the ringmistress. A save.

posted by C_C_T on August 22, 2015 at 9:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Taps

Thank you Taps I'll try it one day.

posted by C_C_T on August 22, 2015 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FS

I suppose it is FS.

posted by C_C_T on August 22, 2015 at 9:04 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Bill

To whoever ever will listen Bill .

posted by C_C_T on August 22, 2015 at 9:04 AM | link to this | reply

Half LOL

💕Are you talking to God sir?  BC-A, Bill’s R💮💮 st

posted by BC-A on August 22, 2015 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

A dreamy poem, I find this to be.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 22, 2015 at 5:19 AM | link to this | reply

What a really nice, sweet poem.  It's a good one for reading outloud.

posted by TAPS. on August 22, 2015 at 4:06 AM | link to this | reply

fine tuning...needs nothing more!

posted by Kabu on August 21, 2015 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply