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I agree, thanks for all the comments Annicita :) Keep checking back for the rest of this story and other entries. :)
posted by
EJ_Norris
on October 24, 2015 at 4:01 PM
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I would find it more plausible if the teachers were more involved with the questioning and applying pressure and guilt
posted by
Annicita
on October 24, 2015 at 11:24 AM
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Well we shall have to see if Andrea can understand why Maggie tried to be helpful.
There does seem to be a moral undertone in your stories, have you ever tried writing for children? 
posted by
C_C_T
on October 23, 2015 at 10:33 AM
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