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Re:
if a friend is always doing this to you....well frustration does set in
posted by
Annicita
on February 21, 2016 at 6:23 AM
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Very interesting...
I agree with the constructive critique from TAPS; does seem like her memories wouldn't flow quite so easily - knowing exact details about what she is "seeing" happens swiftly. Well, just my 2 cents..:)
posted by
Katray2
on November 25, 2015 at 7:53 AM
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The conversations are very interesting, but in reality, they seem to move along too smoothly to be real. Seems like there would be a little hem-hawing around or some other kind of working hard at it.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 23, 2015 at 6:24 PM
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To a dimwit like me she seems to be muddled over the phone calls.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 23, 2015 at 7:12 AM
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We are learning a whole lot about her.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 23, 2015 at 5:32 AM
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