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Very nice (although I have always avoided motorcycles.)
posted by
TAPS.
on January 23, 2016 at 5:34 PM
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scares me
posted by
Lanetay
on January 23, 2016 at 8:01 AM
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Well mind you don't want to come back. Sometimes . Goodness it made me think once I wanted to be a missionary, well I might have tagged along. 
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2016 at 7:27 AM
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There is a lot of freedom there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 23, 2016 at 6:38 AM
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Re: Kabu
Easy Rider, Peter Fonda...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 23, 2016 at 1:21 AM
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Re: Krisles
How fine, how fun, how free, how young!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 23, 2016 at 1:18 AM
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Harley-Davidson Hog....Houston to Fort Worth....Summer ride memory
posted by
Krisles
on January 22, 2016 at 11:10 PM
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Re: Nautikos
What appears to come before is not what is seen at the end, just as when we look at Earth, we must consider, at least, the Solar System! Yes, the last line is as you saw! Great deductive reasoning there. Bingo! Don't worry about the typing; you must be a bit hyper, and proofing is a bore and a chore. I understood what you meant. (I do the same thing, plus I am having keyboard issues; letters and words go missing or are changed, and I don't catch them all.) 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2016 at 9:27 PM
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RP
I meant to say 'what it is' - I am a poor typist, and too often fail to proof-read what I write...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 22, 2016 at 8:20 PM
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RP
It's the last line that makes the poem what is - all that comes before must be seen in its light, as it were, and it isn't what is suggested by all that comes before...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 22, 2016 at 8:13 PM
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I like the literal...the wind in the hair riding into the sunset...Movie time dreams.
posted by
Kabu
on January 22, 2016 at 2:38 PM
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