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Beautiful! Your soul ranges far indeed, but has clearly found it's favourite perch...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 26, 2016 at 12:44 PM
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That's a good lyric.
posted by
BC-A
on January 26, 2016 at 8:48 AM
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Re: C_C_T
I pictured it like a kind of heart as a child.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 26, 2016 at 8:05 AM
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Re: Kabu
Thank you very much!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 26, 2016 at 8:03 AM
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Like a whisper of silk teased by a breeze, like a curl of smoke lazily lifting from a slow burning log. Your words are a siren calling, asking please for more.
posted by
Kabu
on January 26, 2016 at 7:29 AM
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I like your use of allusion in your poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 26, 2016 at 5:42 AM
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This is very well done. I often wonder what a soul looks like. It can't be the little thing I imagined it to be as a child and still do, a kind of roll of whispy cloud.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 26, 2016 at 3:54 AM
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Nice. Welcome to Blogit!
posted by
Justi
on January 26, 2016 at 12:28 AM
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