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Re: Re: Re: Re:C_C_T Presta
So true! 
posted by
Katray2
on February 9, 2016 at 9:53 AM
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Re: Re: Re:C_C_T Presta
Ahh, C_C_T, it only means that when you said "...not criticizing..." I wasn't offended.
For All
I find the people on this site to be ever so gentle, kind, caring and non-critical. For many years I had never posted anything anywhere because of negative and even cruel comments I had read on other sites. A great group here!
RP
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 9, 2016 at 9:41 AM
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Re: Re:C_C_T Presta
Yes a very gentle reply, but what does it mean ?
posted by
C_C_T
on February 9, 2016 at 7:45 AM
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Re: Re: Kabu
and I really enjoyed this version.
posted by
Kabu
on February 8, 2016 at 5:10 PM
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Re: Kabu
Glad you liked it! A spirit is a spirit! In this version, the "Angel" is only in his imagination, not quite real; thus, she disappears as he reaches out to her! The gown diaphenous seemed appropriate. :) In another version, she is real; not an Angel, and still, the gown diaphenous seems appropriate! Thank you so much.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 8, 2016 at 1:36 PM
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Re:C_C_T
Thank you, no offense taken.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 8, 2016 at 1:30 PM
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Loved it dear and I love the thought of diaphenous gowns for there is no sex in heaven An angel can just be a being a spirit.
posted by
Kabu
on February 8, 2016 at 11:21 AM
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Only pointing to it in case you want to publish .Not critizing .'malificient' a good word for a devil.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 8, 2016 at 10:33 AM
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Re: Nautikos
Thanks. Better in a diaphenous gown than a nun's habit, and since it was only a vision in this version...and, yes, there are two versions, neither of which would support an Angel in a nun's habit! LOL! Yes, I figured 'Evening' to be as you intended. Quite good, that one.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 8, 2016 at 10:27 AM
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Re: BC-A
Indeed, love! I smile.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 8, 2016 at 10:21 AM
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Re: Katray2
Thanks so much, a nice compliment from you, it is!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 8, 2016 at 10:20 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Sorry about the word, which one was it?
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 8, 2016 at 10:19 AM
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Re: FSI
Rich and intense, thank you!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 8, 2016 at 10:18 AM
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Re:Grandpa3
Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 8, 2016 at 10:18 AM
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posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 8, 2016 at 10:17 AM
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Indeed, only love love.
posted by
BC-A
on February 8, 2016 at 9:56 AM
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Very well done!
I enjoy a darker edge.
posted by
Katray2
on February 8, 2016 at 9:00 AM
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It is probably what an Angel would do. I think this is quite good writing. One word I could not understand, but it might be American, sometimes they are not listed in the Oxford Dictionary. Well I could understand what it signified. I am dyslexic somewhat.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 8, 2016 at 7:39 AM
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RP
Nice! I just wish Angels wouldn't always appear in diaphenous gowns - it induces unholy thoughts, LOL...Oh, and your second comment to 'Evening' had the intended interpretation...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 8, 2016 at 5:59 AM
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Your poem is rich with intense imagery.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 8, 2016 at 5:24 AM
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Very nice wording with a lot of imagery
Well done!
posted by
Grandpa3
on February 8, 2016 at 4:36 AM
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