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Re: teddypoet52
Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 21, 2016 at 10:32 AM
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Excellence...
posted by
teddypoet52
on February 19, 2016 at 7:22 PM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you very much. Guess it is a matter of personal taste! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 18, 2016 at 1:08 PM
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Both beautiful. I would hate to have to pick which is best.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 18, 2016 at 12:46 PM
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Re: shamasehar
Thanks! That's the spirit!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 18, 2016 at 11:42 AM
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Your words paint a lovely picture whatever be the color.
posted by
shamasehar
on February 18, 2016 at 9:22 AM
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Re: FSI
Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 18, 2016 at 8:44 AM
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Re: Re: Nautikos
Make that "problems." Still having keyboard issues. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 18, 2016 at 8:43 AM
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Re: Katray2
Also glad it reads better to you, also. Yes, jarring images are unpleasant.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 18, 2016 at 8:41 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Glad this version works better for you! I aim to please!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 18, 2016 at 8:37 AM
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Still beautiful!...:)
In all honesty, I could understand C C T's point - for many perhaps, radioactive conjures up thoughts of nuclear effects, which is a bit jarring. Just my two cents.
posted by
Katray2
on February 18, 2016 at 8:25 AM
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Re: Nautikos
I do so agree with you. You read me well. Not subconsciously stated, either. And actually, the history of just California tells a story of deep-seated troubles, contrasted with the face of peace in a paradise-type setting,not to mention the rest of the world's provlems. Bingo!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 18, 2016 at 8:07 AM
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RP
I still think the first version is more interesting. It reflects a (possibly subconscious) sense that there is a troubled world in the background of the moment's idyllic experience...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 18, 2016 at 7:35 AM
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A lovely California scene you have described.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 18, 2016 at 5:28 AM
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Please RPresta you must not take too much notice of what I say. Although for me at least this is perfect. Well you now have two versions so everyone should be happy. At least I can see you sitting admiring the view so tranquil without the fear of radiation.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 18, 2016 at 12:25 AM
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