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🌈It sounds as if it’s the state of communion Naut. BC-A, Bill’s R👀st
posted by
BC-A
on June 2, 2016 at 9:18 AM
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Nautikos
From the pleasures of fresh green grass brushing my bare feet.....to a very desolate and sad image.....it's great (as your haiku always are), but....I wish I had read at the time written and not one after the other...I was enjoying the taste of strawberries and cream, and now I am breathing dust....
posted by
Krisles
on May 31, 2016 at 6:21 PM
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Very good Naut makes me shiver.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 31, 2016 at 9:58 AM
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I love it. Thankfully, they are not all that way....yet.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 30, 2016 at 9:17 PM
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You made it easy for us...LOL! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 30, 2016 at 6:53 PM
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I can see it well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 30, 2016 at 5:25 PM
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posted by
Kabu
on May 30, 2016 at 3:48 PM
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