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Re: anibanerjee
Thank you very much. It can also be read to mean as though there is something left to know, something unsaid...until the fourth line (which is not there). 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 15, 2016 at 12:06 AM
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RPresta
Excellent! The first two lines, demands; the third, is submission ... 'like I don't know'. This feminiinity, to mr, is very sweet.
posted by
anib
on June 13, 2016 at 9:22 PM
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Re: Kabu
Forgot this: 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 12, 2016 at 3:00 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
Was it Beethoven's 5th? LOL! Seriously, thank you, and Kabu, too! There are so many possible endings for this; one last line, yet it makes its own bit of a statement, as paltry as it is.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 12, 2016 at 3:00 PM
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RPresta
I heard music as I imagined your words in action in the world.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 12, 2016 at 2:07 PM
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Thank you, Kabu. Now I have another song stuck in my head... LOL!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 12, 2016 at 12:55 PM
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Kisses sweeter than wine. No need to do anything with this. Just the right amount of notes....or perhaps kisses.
posted by
Kabu
on June 12, 2016 at 12:31 PM
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Re: teddypoet52
You said it!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 12, 2016 at 11:18 AM
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Re: FSI
Yes, indeed.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 12, 2016 at 11:17 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Thank you. I could make a poem out of it, a longer poem, but I kinda like it like this. As you say, 'intriguing.' Just beginning to feel better, thank you again. Antibiotics aren't that easy to get here either; that's part of the problem.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 12, 2016 at 11:16 AM
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Re: Nautikos
Thank you very much. Now I can't get that song out of my head...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 12, 2016 at 11:12 AM
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Indeed.
posted by
teddypoet52
on June 12, 2016 at 9:28 AM
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Ah, yes, the power of a kiss.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 12, 2016 at 6:24 AM
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RP You are a sweetie. I was really intrigued by this.Too vivid an imagination. I can't imagine you giving kisses away freely. You could make a poem out of this. I hope you feel better, antibiotics are not easily available on our health service, I guess everybody tries to get them.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 12, 2016 at 6:17 AM
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RP
I love it! And of course I suddenly hear that song...So kiss me once and kiss me twice then kiss me once again...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 12, 2016 at 5:48 AM
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