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Re: Nautikos
Never too late! I like the simultaneous combo you mentioned; that's a high compliment, and much appreciated! Thank you. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 18, 2016 at 1:56 PM
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RP
I guess I'm a bit late with my praise, LOL, but this this is very good! It has strikingly sensuous and spiritual qualities simultaneously...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 18, 2016 at 11:24 AM
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Re: Lanetay
Could be...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 18, 2016 at 9:56 AM
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off and on love
posted by
Lanetay
on June 18, 2016 at 8:57 AM
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Re: Re: Kabu
HUGS
posted by
Kabu
on June 17, 2016 at 6:24 PM
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Re: By some reason...
Thank so much! A bit of otherworldliness, perhaps? LOL!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 17, 2016 at 5:24 PM
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Re: BC-A
I think you may be correct in that assessment, good sir! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 17, 2016 at 5:22 PM
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Re: teddypoet52
Thanks, teddypoet52! Glad to hear it.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 17, 2016 at 5:22 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
Thank you, Wiley, and it is as I thought; delightful there!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 17, 2016 at 5:21 PM
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Re: C_C_T
Hmm? I'll have to send the Muse. Yes, they say all things are possible. Glad the poem appealed to you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 17, 2016 at 5:20 PM
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Re: Kabu
Everything you write is set in beauty, S.Sister, be it a poem or narrative. Your Muse is a delight. Thank you very much.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 17, 2016 at 5:19 PM
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Re: FSI
Candles make me cough! LOL! But yes, you are right.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 17, 2016 at 5:17 PM
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Re: TAPS
If I think too much on the stuff I write, it would all be either gone or different! LOL! Glad it piqued your interest. It was a phrase that grew...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 17, 2016 at 5:17 PM
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Re: shamasehar
Thank you very much for your comment. I appreciate it.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 17, 2016 at 5:15 PM
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By some reason...
I don't know how to say it. But by some reason I think my usual "I like this one" is not enough this time. Something, which I don't know what should be, makes me think that I actually LOVE it.
posted by
kasperhoe
on June 17, 2016 at 3:57 PM
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This poem has feelings deep that penetrate the mind.
posted by
BC-A
on June 17, 2016 at 3:27 PM
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Fine lines, RP...
posted by
teddypoet52
on June 17, 2016 at 1:19 PM
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RPresta
Lovely poem and just exactly how it is here too.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 17, 2016 at 10:21 AM
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Well please wear a mini skirt if you call , some of these Victorian ladies have such large bustles. I cannot but love this poem because all things are possible.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 17, 2016 at 10:15 AM
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reading back over your comments S. Sisyet tis why I hardly ever write a poem. mine have always been written by my Muse or so it seems.This is very very good.
posted by
Kabu
on June 17, 2016 at 8:14 AM
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Candles lend their way to a lot of romance.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 17, 2016 at 6:37 AM
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That is very interesting. I've been sitting here thinking on each part of it for quite a while.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 17, 2016 at 6:34 AM
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Re: Re: anibanerjee
"these things write themselves" all on their own. Yes, I like that too, Mucho, and Kudos, Lady!
posted by
anib
on June 17, 2016 at 12:41 AM
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Glowing imagery. Very nice.
posted by
shamasehar
on June 17, 2016 at 12:38 AM
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Re: anibanerjee
Thank you for the kind compliment(s)! I can't claim sole credit, if credit be due; these things write themselves in a sense. :) I never quite know how they will turn out until they are written!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 16, 2016 at 11:59 PM
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Wow, RPresta Wow!
So intelligent use of the opposites, "she lights the bleakest voids" and "he lights the bleakest voids". Then there are the differences of feelings, touch, etc ... The poem is evocative of the senses. Sensuous!
posted by
anib
on June 16, 2016 at 11:31 PM
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