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Annicita
Thank you so much. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 31, 2016 at 7:47 PM
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thought provoking and melancholic
posted by
Annicita
on August 31, 2016 at 8:10 AM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you, TAPS!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 30, 2016 at 2:57 PM
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Intriguing. I've always loved a forest--any forest--and all things therein.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 30, 2016 at 9:55 AM
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Re: Nautikos
Good one,Naut! Very good. I had thought of that myself! LOL! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 28, 2016 at 8:27 AM
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Re: kasperhoe
Thank you, kasperhoe. Did you read my first comment to Aba? That should explain. It.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 28, 2016 at 8:25 AM
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RP
Haunting! I wonder how Siggi Freud would interpret this dream...
posted by
Nautikos
on August 27, 2016 at 8:32 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Kabu
Thank you, Kabu. I never know. I love your way of thinking, dear sweet S. Sister, and you are right about poems making people stop and think, or feel - something, at least! If they do, that is good - imho.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 27, 2016 at 8:29 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
Could be... Thank you, Wiley.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 27, 2016 at 8:26 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Aba
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 27, 2016 at 8:25 PM
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Re: Re: Kabu
No it is a wonderful poem. maybe I am wrong but a truly good poem makes people stop and think and so many people see so many different possibilities. My way of thinking anyway.
posted by
Kabu
on August 27, 2016 at 5:26 PM
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RPresta
Two souls bringing love together after a walk in the dark.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 27, 2016 at 5:23 PM
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Beautiful
By some reason, I couldn't stop thinking of a lonely walker, standing there as the second person.
But at the same time, I wondered of a few things: "Being safe from what?" and "What brought the protagonist to this darkened road?"
posted by
kasperhoe
on August 27, 2016 at 3:48 PM
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Re: Re: Aba
I would certainly like it to go down better. I'll have a Saturday party. 
posted by
anib
on August 26, 2016 at 10:52 PM
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Re: BC-A
Thank you, BC-A. That's how they were meant to be read.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 26, 2016 at 9:05 PM
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Re: Aba
I love your comment! This is where I claim some creative license. Operative word: 'dream.' I invented a dream, a person in a forest, a path! What it represents is simple: as we go through life we meet different people. And anyone who claims the path of life is an easy route is either a liar or a fool, in my humble Italian opinion. So no, I don't think you're inebriated, but perhaps this poem would have gone down better if you had been! LOL!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 26, 2016 at 9:04 PM
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Re: Katray2
Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 26, 2016 at 8:54 PM
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Re: Lanetay
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 26, 2016 at 8:53 PM
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Re: Kabu
You are right, we all read something different into some poetry. I claim a lot of creative license on this one, though. Perhaps it's not a very good poem... Seems confusing for folk.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 26, 2016 at 8:52 PM
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Re: C_C_T
No, but we have all lost people we cared about.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 26, 2016 at 8:47 PM
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Re: FSI
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 26, 2016 at 8:46 PM
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These are comforting words love.
posted by
BC-A
on August 26, 2016 at 5:30 PM
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Poignantly beautiful..
posted by
Katray2
on August 26, 2016 at 5:17 PM
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My take is that this poem has a whole lot of possibilities, doubt mixed with fear - hope with doubt, luminescent yet far too treacherous for one as I, the waiting, ever waiting, to be safe again, wondering? Why again . . . Oh, my ramblings . . . Somehow I know that I am not clear. Helpless, the best I can describe myself. I must give it a deeper thought. Am I inebriated? 
posted by
anib
on August 26, 2016 at 9:05 AM
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meet up and become one
posted by
Lanetay
on August 26, 2016 at 8:58 AM
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wondering if there was a bridge between you and the one who seeks you. We all read something different into poetry and that is what I find so wonderful. I have written poems that followed my though pattern and found otheres read something else.
For me I feel this soul is seeking forgiveness
posted by
Kabu
on August 26, 2016 at 8:52 AM
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Rather soul searching RP. Sometimes it is this hard to walk the path you have so vividly described one cannot help wondering if it was a lost love that you painfully sought.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 26, 2016 at 8:22 AM
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That special someone is well worth the wait and makes up for those times alone.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 26, 2016 at 4:52 AM
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