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Oh my goodness, the complexity here! And to get the proper words into this mix! Fabulous job. A couplet is probably more than my speed... :) I admire your skill and art. Thank you for the info! I am not ready to even attempt such fine work.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 16, 2016 at 1:31 AM
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Its true how the clouds slowly creep up on all of us, watching, listening and waiting to either pass us by or bring in the storm. Very nice poem.
Thanks so much for your kind comment in my blog.
posted by
shobana
on September 15, 2016 at 11:02 PM
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Kabu
on September 15, 2016 at 4:36 PM
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thank you Kabu, your kind words have truly blessed me and encouraged me today, I would love to hear your music for it, I love this form that I just recently learned, I'm writing some more and will share soon, thanks again for stopping by, I so appreciate you, take care and may God bless
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Riversidepoet
on September 15, 2016 at 2:47 PM
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I just love blogit. I have never studied poetry so really I cannot call myself a poet, but I love to read good poetry and write my own way sometimes. This seems to me good poetry. I could write music to flow with the words and I can see a man dancing, slow beautiful steps and gestures. Rather sad I think.
posted by
Kabu
on September 15, 2016 at 11:10 AM
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thank you for stopping by and your kind words, so glad you enjoyed this poem, please come again and may God bless
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 15, 2016 at 7:36 AM
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thanks, I appreciate you, yes I tried to symbolize life, wtih thoughts of how it might feel to the homeless using this new form of poetry that I learned of recently, thanks for commenting, come again and may God bless
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 15, 2016 at 7:35 AM
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Nice little kick to this Kent well done.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 15, 2016 at 6:56 AM
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A cloud symbolizes a lot of different things.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 15, 2016 at 5:47 AM
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thanks Taps, I appreciate you, I really like this form, always glad to try something new, glad you liked it, may God bless
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 14, 2016 at 8:46 PM
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seems to be a lot of different info on this form, but this is what I used as a guide
English Madrigal
Type: Structure, Metrical Requirement, Repetitive Requirement, Rhyme Scheme Requirement, Isosyllabic
Description: Three verses of iambic pentameter: a triplet, a quatrain, and a sestet with the following rhyme and repetition scheme: AB1B2 abAB1 abbAB1B2.
Attributed to: Geoffrey Chaucer
Origin: English
Schematic: Rhyme and Repetition: AB1B2 abAB1 abbAB1B2
Meter: Iambic pentameter = xX xX xX xX xX
Rhyme alone: abb abab abbabb
Repetition alone: 123 xx12 xxx123
Line/Poem Length: 13
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 14, 2016 at 8:44 PM
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And quite old is the Italian version of madrigal, correct? :)
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 14, 2016 at 8:19 PM
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Very nice! I love to read good poetry outloud. It is fun to try to get it just right.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 14, 2016 at 7:54 PM
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thanks for your visit and kind words, I appreciate you, so glad you enjoyed this new form I've learned, thanks and may God bless
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 14, 2016 at 6:45 PM
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this is the English version which is much more defined, more rules, there is also an Italian version, it is a new form I just come across, I really like it, I am going to try more, so glad you enjoyed it, I appreciate you, come again and may God bless
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 14, 2016 at 6:44 PM
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Riversidepoet
Again, fabulous! Lyrics? Done so well; I admire your skill very much. Italian, is it?
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 14, 2016 at 6:38 PM
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Very nice 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 14, 2016 at 6:10 PM
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