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Aba
Thank you very much dost
posted by
shobana
on October 2, 2016 at 5:46 AM
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UKUSA
Haiku? I think that its really good what you wrote. I must try writing them one of these days. Thank you for stopping by my blog
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 6:48 AM
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Kabu
Thank you Kabu and love you.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 6:41 AM
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Riversidepoet
Thank you so much and am glad you loved it.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 6:34 AM
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TAPS
Thank you TAPS for that lovely statement.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 6:29 AM
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CCT
Thank you CC, I'm glad you think so.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 6:25 AM
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FSI
Thank you FSI, I try to put my thoughts as well as I can in words.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 6:19 AM
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Justi
LOL, thank you.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 6:15 AM
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Wiley John
Thank you Sir, appreciate it.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 6:11 AM
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Naut
LOL, yes a tricky situation
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 5:56 AM
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RPresta
Yes indeed it is a complicated situation to be in just trying out different forms of feelings
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 5:52 AM
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Aba
Thank you my dear friend
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 5:41 AM
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Chuck
Thank you.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 5:38 AM
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Love your style 
Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 29, 2016 at 2:56 AM
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Love your style Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 29, 2016 at 2:43 AM
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Emotions runs in a wide array as one reads through a poem as this. Excellently done, dearestShobs. 
posted by
anib
on September 28, 2016 at 10:09 PM
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A nice poem, well told, but it is a complicated set of emotions stirring in this story.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 27, 2016 at 7:57 PM
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Shobana
I see problems down the road...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 27, 2016 at 1:43 PM
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Shobana
Well expressed love for another.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 27, 2016 at 1:15 PM
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ruck roe sorry such will never work. Good poetry.
posted by
Justi
on September 27, 2016 at 11:53 AM
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You have a way of conveying emotions in your poetry.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 27, 2016 at 10:13 AM
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Of course forbidden fruit is the sweetest, but if one cannot help but fall in love, it is still a temptation to the lady with the ring. Nicely written Shobana , your poems are rather nice this time round.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 27, 2016 at 9:53 AM
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I'm sure glad you came back to write for us.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 27, 2016 at 8:37 AM
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what a beautiful story you have told, I loved the words you used in this and the different forms of the same word, brilliantly done, thanks for sharing, may God bless
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 27, 2016 at 8:08 AM
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Forbidden love, it thrills and it hurts. Well done sweetheart friend.
posted by
Kabu
on September 27, 2016 at 7:34 AM
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Glad I came back after my Bible study! I missed you when I was reading blog
here last hour. You sure love writing poetry. Maybe i could start with haiku someday
OK, here's a try:
"poets and poetesses
fishermen on Galilee
find with words love's lure." (c) UKUSA, 2016.
posted by
NocrossJustchristmas
on September 27, 2016 at 3:36 AM
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