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I know it's an old one now, but...
better late than never.
I really liked this one. There's something good vs evil in this poem.
And at the same time, I thought:
We're human beings, standing in the middle of The Lord and Satan.
posted by
kasperhoe
on April 22, 2017 at 2:47 PM
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It is the satirical style and the flow that is quite endearing. 
posted by
anib
on February 22, 2017 at 9:53 PM
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interesting
posted by
Annicita
on November 17, 2016 at 8:38 PM
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much enjoyed, very well arranged , just a pleasure to read, thanks, and may God bless
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 20, 2016 at 7:51 AM
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Sorry, I hope my previous comment about the Toronto Blue Jays did not jinx your winning and staying in the game.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 19, 2016 at 4:53 PM
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Re: Kabu and Naut
I could imagine this set to music going viral on YouTube.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 19, 2016 at 12:21 PM
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Well done Naut, quite an interesting poem. I like something out of the ordinary it stimulates the brain.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 19, 2016 at 11:02 AM
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Way to go Nautikos. One knows from growing up in the '60's just how effective poetry and music is. This needs to be submitted to a wider audience or sent to a musician to add music to it.
posted by
Kabu
on October 19, 2016 at 7:50 AM
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I like this poem a whole lot, Naut. Great imagery.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 19, 2016 at 6:32 AM
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LOL, and you incorporated even the beard in this
Enjoyed this
posted by
shobana
on October 19, 2016 at 5:28 AM
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How fun. Son #1 had just stopped in to see if I'd heard anything from my Canada friend whose team was The Blue Jays as he keeps up with them and wanted to wish you gung ho and whoopty do and all that jazz. So I read him your poem and then we looked up dhimmi as neither of us was familiar with it. Knowing what that meant did add a lot to the poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 18, 2016 at 8:47 PM
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Nautikos
Sometimes one just can't help what pops into one's mind, and musicality just enhances that! What can I say? :)
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 18, 2016 at 8:12 PM
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