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Re: Aba
Agreed!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 2, 2017 at 12:35 AM
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Re: Aba
Thank you, Aba. How interesting for me to note what you and Annicita observed regarding the visual aspect and presentation of the poem. Thank you both very much for mentioning that. I have one that has been written for quite some time which I cannot decide upon format style and this helps. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 2, 2017 at 12:35 AM
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The new year typos may please be ... You know what
posted by
anib
on January 1, 2017 at 9:14 PM
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A beautiful and sweet imagery, Pesta dear. I must repeat Annicita, I toolkit the design of the poetry, and the warm coziness of a blanket wrapped
posted by
anib
on January 1, 2017 at 9:13 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
Thank you, WIley. I'm sure Kabu makes sure you have a cozy, snug blanket and is taking good care of you. Happy New Year's Eve to you!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 31, 2016 at 5:59 PM
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Re: Kabu
Thank you, dear S. Sister, Kabu. I must get some. Had them at the other house. Yes, the creatures come and eat them. For shame. Happy New Year's Eve to you!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 31, 2016 at 5:58 PM
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RPresta
Lovely poetry and I love the "snug blanket" during out snow storm now.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 31, 2016 at 1:58 PM
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A lovely poem, I bought some Hyacinths about to flower in a pot lasy year and they were beautiful. They filled the house with their perfume. When they were dying back I put the pot outside and some one naughty dug them up and ate them. Sigh!! happy new year
posted by
Kabu
on December 31, 2016 at 12:49 PM
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Re: FSI
Thank you, FSI. I'm glad you like the coziness of it. Me, not so much. :) 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 31, 2016 at 11:23 AM
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Re: Lanetay
I'm with you on that. Very much so.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 31, 2016 at 11:22 AM
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Re: Annicita
Thank you for that observation, Annicita! It would have looked shorter written each on one line, but I didn't like that look as well.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 31, 2016 at 11:22 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Thank you for your sweet words, CC. To me, when one sees a flower breaking through the snow, there is a promise of Spring; a promise of hope.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 31, 2016 at 11:20 AM
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Reading your poem gives me a lot of comfort. I find winter in general to be very cozy.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 31, 2016 at 8:37 AM
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I dont think I like the winter anymore too cold
posted by
Lanetay
on December 31, 2016 at 8:36 AM
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I like the shape of the poem. As if a person wrapped in a blanket.
posted by
Annicita
on December 31, 2016 at 6:09 AM
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A sweet peaceful poem RP. Snow is warmer than frost. I know those Grape hyacinths are quite prolific but a good capture to see them against snow. I like the way you control your words.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 31, 2016 at 1:42 AM
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