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Re: shamesehar
I see you see beyond veils... Thank you. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 23, 2017 at 8:10 PM
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Subtle with such depth...beyond the veil lies the true self.
posted by
shamasehar
on January 23, 2017 at 8:01 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
So good to see you here, Wiley! Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 23, 2017 at 7:05 PM
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RPresta
Wonderful poem as they all are love.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 23, 2017 at 6:22 PM
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Re: Nautikos
Thanks, Naut. If one spells out too much, it insults the reader's intelligence at times, and if one reveals too little, it often serves only to frustrate. This is about people who may rush to judgment based on appearance.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 23, 2017 at 2:41 PM
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Re: Kabu
Tis you, dear Kabu, who is the gift at Blogit, as are all who reside here. Thank you for such a high compliment, and I am humbled greatly.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 23, 2017 at 2:35 PM
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RP
A powerful poem that allows for several interpretations - always a sign of good poetry...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 23, 2017 at 11:32 AM
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i do believe you are a gift to us here at blogit. Such a wonderful poet that you are.
posted by
Kabu
on January 23, 2017 at 10:10 AM
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Re: Aba
Thank you so much for going back and doing that. I will check. Glad you liked them.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2017 at 9:33 PM
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I read your lady of the wheel and Silence; excellent they are.
posted by
anib
on January 22, 2017 at 8:48 PM
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Re: sam444
Thanks, sam. Glad you liked it.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2017 at 7:40 PM
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Wonderful poem! Such a dramatic close! Well scripted indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 22, 2017 at 7:27 PM
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Re: Annicita
Many thanks to you, Annicita!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2017 at 6:14 PM
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Re: TAPS
Many thanks, TAPS, as are you. Every time I am about to give up the poetic ghost, your words encourage. Thank you, again.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2017 at 6:13 PM
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wonderful!
posted by
Annicita
on January 22, 2017 at 6:05 PM
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I just love this. You are such a poet.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 22, 2017 at 6:02 PM
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Re: pendorin
So true. :)
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2017 at 4:56 PM
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How I can relate when people stare into your eyes, but don't c inside.
posted by
pendorin
on January 22, 2017 at 4:49 PM
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Re: FSI
Yes, so true that can be. Thank you, FSI.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2017 at 2:37 PM
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Re: C_C_T
Thanks, CC! That's a lovely thing to say. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2017 at 2:36 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Aba
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2017 at 2:31 PM
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patmore
Hi, there! Thank you for stopping by and reading...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2017 at 2:30 PM
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The relationship was not able to get to that next level with him unable to roletake, which is essential for all human relationships. A lack of roletaking leads to deteriorating and ending relationships.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 22, 2017 at 9:29 AM
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Well I read it as emotion bravely released. It is not easy to turn sad thoughts into beauty as you have done here.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 22, 2017 at 7:30 AM
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Re: Re: Aba
I guessed so, it is perfectly natural. I read that Hindi.
posted by
anib
on January 22, 2017 at 4:17 AM
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Re: Aba
Make that 'Hindi.' I had left the subject line alone from your comment. From my Western eye it just looked like something you had crossed out/lined out. :)
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2017 at 12:47 AM
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Re: Re: Re: दीरेस्ट Aba
Well, since I don't read, write or speak Hindiu, I had no clue! lol. Not that it wouldn't be fun to learn.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2017 at 12:23 AM
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Re: दीरेस्ट Presta
posted by
patmore
on January 22, 2017 at 12:21 AM
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Re: Re: दीरेस्ट Aba
Thanks a lot. The compliment somehow appeared in Hindi as dearest.
posted by
anib
on January 21, 2017 at 11:02 PM
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Re: दीरेस्ट Aba
Oh, I do thank you, Aba! I was fiddling around with it while you were reading, I am afraid. Such wonderful compliments from you! Wow! I shall now go to read your last post. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 21, 2017 at 10:51 PM
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दीरेस्ट Presta
A most delightful poem written with all the verve of an accomplished poet Very passionate and at the same time with pathos so beautifully incorporated. Kudos!! I read it twice to get the full import of the last lines. Now to your missed out ones I go. This one floored me. 
posted by
anib
on January 21, 2017 at 10:45 PM
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