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Re: teddypoet52

Thank you, Teddy. I appreciate it! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 28, 2017 at 9:12 PM | link to this | reply

Fine mist...

posted by teddypoet52 on January 26, 2017 at 2:59 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Lanetay

Then that's a good thing! Thank you, Lantay. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 25, 2017 at 6:14 PM | link to this | reply

makes me think of the one that I would love to have a connection with

posted by Lanetay on January 25, 2017 at 8:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Well, that's a new one on me, Naut! But I'll take it. I once worked with a lady who had been a Flamenco dancer - uhh, not at work, in Mexico. LOL. Me, I love that Flamenco guitar... Thank you.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 24, 2017 at 10:17 PM | link to this | reply

RP

For me this evokes a vision of a passionate Flamenco dancer...

posted by Nautikos on January 24, 2017 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re:WileyJohn

Thank you. Well now, me Wiley, jus' don't ya be a-takin' just yet, methinks. Lady Kabu needs you, as does Blogitsville!  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 24, 2017 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Thank you, Bill. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 24, 2017 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

You know, S. Sister, I tend to believe you. Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 24, 2017 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

You are right. They are all over the place, aren't they? LOL. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 24, 2017 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: chuck_ibrahim

Glad you liked it, Chuck! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 24, 2017 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

patmore - I had trouble posting a response to your comment.

Thank you, patmore. Though the title is the same, the two poems are quite and entirely different. Hers really shines when you consider the last two lines. Her bio claims she had said her husband was gay, though it is of no consequence to me, but it does slant the poem's view toward her well-known wit, having that bit of background knowledge. Thank you for your comment and for the poem.  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 24, 2017 at 8:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thanks, CC! Hopefully not too soon, in the angel department... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 24, 2017 at 8:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba

You said it well. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 24, 2017 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba - Hi there

Thanks again, for the nice words, even speechless! LOL! I appreciate your thoughts. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 24, 2017 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

Yes, that would be great. I see visuals often when I compose, and would like to incorporate them into the narratives. But... Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 24, 2017 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

Thanks so much, sam! I don't know what to say! I appreciate it a lot.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 24, 2017 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

A delightful flight methinks.

posted by WileyJohn on January 24, 2017 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply

posted by BC-A on January 24, 2017 at 5:33 PM | link to this | reply

I won't be far away from you when that happens I amd sure dear S. Sister.

posted by Kabu on January 24, 2017 at 1:35 PM | link to this | reply

One feels a wide range of emotions while reading your poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 24, 2017 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful work 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on January 24, 2017 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

Re: RPresta

Your title, Finis, instantly reminded me of a poem with an identiccal title by Dorothy Parker. Very different fom yours (which I also like) Here it is:

Finis

Now it's over, and now it's done;
    Why does everything look the same?
Just as bright, the unheeding sun, --
    Can't it see that the parting came?
People hurry and work and swear,
    Laugh and grumble and die and wed,
Ponder what they will eat and wear, --
    Don't they know that our love is dead?
Just as busy, the crowded street;
    Cars and wagons go rolling on,
Children chuckle, and lovers meet, --
    Don't they know that our love is gone?
No one pauses to pay a tear;
    None walks slow, for the love that's through, --
I might mention, my recent dear,
    I've reverted to normal, too.

posted by patmore on January 24, 2017 at 4:26 AM | link to this | reply

Quite emotive RP. Your aspirations will appeal to the romantics. You will make a lovely Angel.

posted by C_C_T on January 24, 2017 at 1:51 AM | link to this | reply

Uff, not

posted by anib on January 23, 2017 at 11:03 PM | link to this | reply

And I can't stop saying romanticism, yearning, ecstasy, spiritualism ... All make for all that can no be said

posted by anib on January 23, 2017 at 11:02 PM | link to this | reply

Hi there ... wow Presta

The beginning when I lose my self to you, take my hands, raise me, fly me above the Never ofTomorrow, leaving behind each Yesterday that never was. Scintillating, finest of fine imagery to say the least. Wow dear Resta I said ... left speechless! That is all I can say. 

posted by anib on January 23, 2017 at 11:00 PM | link to this | reply

as I was reading it I thought how cool this would be if it took the shape of a cloud or a wisp of smoke curling....love it

posted by Annicita on January 23, 2017 at 10:05 PM | link to this | reply

Magnificent poetry! I get so wrapped up in your work! KUDOS!!! sam 

posted by sam444 on January 23, 2017 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply