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Re: sam444
I tried to post something short and simple. Guess it's not my style or talent. The words come out how they write themselves to be. Thank you for telling me; you understand. I'm sure your poetry was/is beautiful. There are so many talented and gifted people on Blogit. And as a plus, they aren't arrogant or condescending or mean-spirited. That's why I like it. 
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Sea_Gypsy
on February 2, 2017 at 8:53 PM
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Re: Nautikos
Thank you for that, Naut! Uhh, fortunately, it's a lot shorter... Had I posted something that long - well, even I probably couldn't write one that long, thankfully for all in Blogitsville! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 2, 2017 at 8:46 PM
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Re: Kabu
Great points, Kabu! There's nothing I can add to that! Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 2, 2017 at 8:44 PM
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Well it really worked great in this poem! I have written poetry in the past and posted it on Blogit and I was just after imagery as you were but so many times readers thought it was directly about me! But that was not the case in most instances! If it did then I would say as much! sam
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sam444
on February 2, 2017 at 8:43 PM
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Re: FSI
Thanks, FSI. As I said, it was a figure of speech written for effect.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 2, 2017 at 8:43 PM
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Re: Annicita
True, but this was figuratively speaking. Thank you, Annicita.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 2, 2017 at 8:42 PM
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Re: BC-A
Salient point, Bill.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 2, 2017 at 8:40 PM
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Re: C_C_T
I used creative license here as a verbal aid. Thank you, CC.
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Sea_Gypsy
on February 2, 2017 at 8:40 PM
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Re: chuck_ibrahim
A bit melodramatic? Thank you, Chuck.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 2, 2017 at 8:38 PM
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Re: Katray2
Thanks, Kat. Yes.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 2, 2017 at 8:37 PM
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Re: Aba
Yes, there are good souls, more than not.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 2, 2017 at 8:36 PM
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RP
Well done! It reminds me of things in T. S. Eliot's The Wasteland...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 2, 2017 at 11:12 AM
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When we know someone is hgurting, we should all hurt. Why can't we spread love instead of poison dear S, Sister.
posted by
Kabu
on February 2, 2017 at 10:11 AM
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Sometimes letting it out can be the best medicine.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 2, 2017 at 9:26 AM
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Yes it matters to you. It cleanses the mind and opens the path to new feelings
posted by
Annicita
on February 2, 2017 at 8:49 AM
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#1 hears you cry. That's the person that can take control of their life love.
posted by
BC-A
on February 2, 2017 at 7:53 AM
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Sadly not many can cope with this,if it is what I think. It is not much good crying at the time. One cries afterwards, as it is all one can do. Of course I may be only thinking of one's own experience. Good writing though RP.
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C_C_T
on February 2, 2017 at 7:08 AM
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It is amazing how a poet describes suffering. Nice poem
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 2, 2017 at 3:24 AM
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Timely and powerful, RPresta!
I oft wonder too..
posted by
Katray2
on February 2, 2017 at 12:14 AM
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RP
It does make a lot of difference, dear Presta. There is, after all, some good soul in empathy for those silently suffering theirs. 
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anib
on February 1, 2017 at 10:38 PM
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