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Re: Re: Re: Aba Brother
Ohhh, I get it now! LOL! I'm blonde at times... I can be very concrete, and English is almost my second language... That's my story and I'm stickin' to it! Thank you, dear li'l bro. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 6, 2017 at 9:51 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Nautikos
Si! Hah! Polskie! Yes, the write is reminiscent of Verdi's La Forza..., now that you mention it! Must be from hearing all those operas as a child. :) Polskie. Tak. Polak jest dobry. Moja mama była pół polska lub wschodnioeuropejska. Oder deutsche Werke.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 6, 2017 at 9:48 PM
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Re: Re: Nautikos
Your poem brought to mnd Verdi's La Forza del Destino, since there's a lot of sooth-saying involved. So I wrote my answer in -- Polish...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 6, 2017 at 7:55 PM
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Re: Re: Aba Brother
Oh, no no, sis Presta, I did not mean giant in size but its being immensely beautiful, Lol
posted by
anib
on June 6, 2017 at 5:03 PM
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Re: GM
Awwh, so sweet. Thank you, and her also! Cheers! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 6, 2017 at 2:07 PM
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RP
My wife is from Thailand, so I know enough Thai to either stay out of trouble, or sometimes get into trouble! Those phrases are "Thank you", Good luck", and "I love you". Cheers
posted by
GoldenMean
on June 6, 2017 at 1:21 PM
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Re: Re: GM
Oops! Sorry, it was Italian. Thought everyone knew I'm part Italian.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 6, 2017 at 1:12 PM
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Re: Aba Brother
Yes, I got carried away - again. Thanks, and hope you are having a nice vacation. I'm gonna go for shorter stuff! I swear...almost. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 6, 2017 at 11:52 AM
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Re: GM
Hi, GM! No, no name calling. Naut merely told me what he thought of my poem, and I thanked him. I believe your language could be a form of Hindi, and if so, that last phrase is a "Whoa!" Naut, what's the language in which you wrote your comment? Italian, Spanish, Portuguese, Catalan? LOL!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 6, 2017 at 11:51 AM
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Wow, what a giant of a poem! Never thought one could write so proficiently on such a complicated subject such as the Fates.kudos lady Presta, my big sis.I can't add emotis.
posted by
anib
on June 6, 2017 at 5:15 AM
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OK you two, stop it
Now I just know that you two must be calling me bad names, in that furrin language of yers, LOL. Actually, I am wondering, what language is it, and what did you say? In response, I will say "kop khun kop" and "chok dee" and "chan lak khun". Now, what language do you think that is?? You tell me yours, and I wll tell you mine..... Cheers
posted by
GoldenMean
on June 6, 2017 at 1:55 AM
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Re: Nautikos
Grazie mille! Verisssimo. Abbiamo le nostre menti, nostri istinti. Il destino ha tutto altro...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 5, 2017 at 6:18 PM
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Re: Annicita
I understand what you are saying. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 5, 2017 at 5:48 PM
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RP
Eccelente! E il destino non divulga suoi segreti...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 5, 2017 at 4:57 PM
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we can be told what is going to happen...some of us see what is going to happen...but we can change our course by our actions and words...
posted by
Annicita
on June 5, 2017 at 3:24 PM
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Re: Kabu
Thanks so much, S. Sister. I'm glad you liked the ending. At one point I was going to go with the plural, Fates, as in the Three Fates, but I would have veered further off the track than I had meant to anyway. :) I may post a bit more on this later. So sweet of you to comment so positively.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 5, 2017 at 12:19 PM
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Re: GM
Thank you. Yes, GM, most probably do mean no harm, and they, at least, believe what they are saying, but traditionally fraud and deception have reigned supreme. What name one choses to ascribe to those whose actions are less than honorable is a matter of personal opinion and belief, though it is, to me, the opposite of good. And yes, you read me correctly.
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Sea_Gypsy
on June 5, 2017 at 12:14 PM
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Re: GM
Thank you, GM! The genesis of this poem is interesting and I may post something about it. In this poem's content I am, on one level, simply presenting a thought process to arrive at 'Who knows?'
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 5, 2017 at 11:53 AM
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i love this work of yours. I knew it was building as I read and thoroughly applaud the ending. well done. S. Sister, beaufitul one.
posted by
Kabu
on June 5, 2017 at 10:58 AM
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Re: BC-A
I would imagine a lot of imagination!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 5, 2017 at 10:49 AM
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Re: FSI
Thank you again, FSI!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 5, 2017 at 10:48 AM
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Re: CCT
Thank you, CCT. To answer your question, it's all relative to what one's concept is of 'easy.' Because it's not advanced mathematics, a debated quantum theory or a structured canto, in that sense, yes, to me this is sorta easy. :) And a bit of fun.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 5, 2017 at 10:47 AM
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Re: GM
Bingo! More later.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 5, 2017 at 10:19 AM
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I wonder if it takes imagination to believe the gypsy's reading of your palms. Stare in 'em yourself.
posted by
BC-A
on June 5, 2017 at 9:46 AM
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What a beautiful, magnificent poem that of which you have written.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 5, 2017 at 9:29 AM
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Yes I guess you hit the nail on the head RP. A myriad things will happen tomorrow, one might involve you. Quite an interesting poem, I wonder does it come easy, your poems do appear to be well thought out.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 5, 2017 at 7:29 AM
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I think that most of the astrologers, tarot card readers, palm readers, psychics etc., have good intentions, and their skill may be great. But they have fallen for the deceptions of evil, as I think you may imply. This was subtle, and I had to read your poem again to see this.
posted by
GoldenMean
on June 5, 2017 at 3:56 AM
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Excellent poem. It seems to deify Fate, but what is Fate? This implies that Something or Someone, somewhere, is in control of our ultimate destiny. I think we determine our own Fate, and the sooner we realize it, the better. Also, your poem leaves out the diabolical deceptions of evil people, which can detour or hijack our Fate, if we let them. Cheers
posted by
GoldenMean
on June 5, 2017 at 3:50 AM
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