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Re: Re: JennyHeart -oops, excuse the typos!

Sorry for typo

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 4, 2017 at 1:54 AM | link to this | reply

Re: HennyHeart

Thank you, Jenny. Glad you enjoyed it. it does indeed have a fantasy feel, as does much of my poetry, though it is mostly all reality-based. If not, I couldn't write it, nor would it be worth reading. lol. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 4, 2017 at 1:09 AM | link to this | reply

A mystery

The poem is about a mysterious fantasy in my opinion. I enjoyed reding it. More!!!!

posted by JennyHeart on July 3, 2017 at 8:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: RP

Naut, thank you very much. It did turn out that way. Was still just a "skeleton" of a poem, but I ran with it... Uhh, not literally, mind you. Still not feeling well enough for much computer time. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 30, 2017 at 10:13 PM | link to this | reply

RP

Well done - a perfect, subdued and sightly ominous drumbeat announcing an enigmatic change of being...

posted by Nautikos on June 30, 2017 at 10:01 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

I appreciate that you liked it. Thank you, TAPS! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 30, 2017 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

I'm so glad. Thank you, Annicita. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 30, 2017 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

i very much appreciate your kind words, S. Sister. Love to you, too! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 30, 2017 at 9:56 PM | link to this | reply

Re: WileyJohn

Thanks, Wiley. Very much. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 30, 2017 at 9:55 PM | link to this | reply

Re: chuck_ibrahim

Thank you very much, Chuck. You too! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 30, 2017 at 9:54 PM | link to this | reply

That's great.  Well done.

posted by TAPS. on June 30, 2017 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

love it

posted by Annicita on June 30, 2017 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply

the mystery and romance that is woven here with your words is spell binding you gypsy Soul Sister you.. xoxox much love.

posted by Kabu on June 30, 2017 at 7:10 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Wonderful mysterious love.

posted by WileyJohn on June 30, 2017 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful! have a wonderful weekend  

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on June 30, 2017 at 2:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Thank you, and I agree, mystery is an element that adds to romance... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 30, 2017 at 1:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Then thank you, because that means I've done my work okay. :) 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 30, 2017 at 1:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you, CCT. What a sweet thing to say; perhaps one could think that it is thorns that have roses... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 30, 2017 at 1:14 PM | link to this | reply

I love the element of mystery. That adds a lot to romance, I feel.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 30, 2017 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

These poems of yours are so alive love.

posted by BC-A on June 30, 2017 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply

Yes I know the feeling RP. Perhaps it is what stirs the elements of expression as a soft release from the wanton form of love. I cannot think of you as a rose, you are what I will post probably tomorrow. You see a rose has thorns and I have not seen any in your nature.

posted by C_C_T on June 30, 2017 at 12:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: To Aba brother

Thank you very much, dear Aba. A bit different for me, and a quick one at that. But fun! Many happy returns of the day to you also! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 29, 2017 at 10:56 PM | link to this | reply

To dear Sis
'Alive in the shadow of her dreams', pathos in 'undone' contrasted in harsher and dimming . Very well done, & Many Happy Returns of the Day.

posted by anib on June 29, 2017 at 10:39 PM | link to this | reply