Go to Sea Gypsy Poetry
- Add a comment
- Go to (No subject)
Re: RASSE
Thank you, RASSE. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 19, 2017 at 9:37 AM
| link to this | reply
Very deep emotion. I like it. A lot.
posted by
RASSE
on July 19, 2017 at 4:08 AM
| link to this | reply
Very deep emotion. I like it. A lot.
posted by
RASSE
on July 19, 2017 at 4:08 AM
| link to this | reply
Re: JennyHeart
Thank you so much, Jenny.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 17, 2017 at 11:57 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: chuck_ibrahim
Thank you, Chuck.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 17, 2017 at 11:56 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: Anicita
Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 17, 2017 at 11:56 PM
| link to this | reply
So haunting and mysterious. I like this poem and all of your other ones as well.
posted by
JennyHeart
on July 17, 2017 at 10:35 AM
| link to this | reply
A poem where the emotions are deeply expressed. Thanks for sharing
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on July 17, 2017 at 8:33 AM
| link to this | reply
How beautiful this is!
posted by
Amanda__
on July 17, 2017 at 6:47 AM
| link to this | reply
well done!
posted by
Annicita
on July 17, 2017 at 5:51 AM
| link to this | reply
Re: Re: C_C_T
Well perhaps that is the way to go, although sometimes I look at old stuff and think that was a bit hairy.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 17, 2017 at 1:08 AM
| link to this | reply
Re: C_C_T
Thanks, CCT. It's just a free-flow draft, posted as-is, raw and unworked.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 16, 2017 at 2:08 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: JennyHeart
Thanks, Jenny. As I had said, I don't even post "skeletons" of poems, except for this one. It is raw, and unworked but I may or may not leave it. I appreciate everyone's comments.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 16, 2017 at 2:06 PM
| link to this | reply
Well I had not read this, it is really stark and would apply well to any loved one who was suffering . Well done, RP . I really was moved by this.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 16, 2017 at 7:38 AM
| link to this | reply
I thjink this poem is great as it. I leaves the readers with the agony from their emotions of such situations. Really it will make readers feel the message deep within them. It did for me!
posted by
JennyHeart
on July 16, 2017 at 1:46 AM
| link to this | reply
Re: shelly_b
Thanks.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 15, 2017 at 6:52 PM
| link to this | reply
I feel your pain. 
posted by
shelly_b
on July 15, 2017 at 6:51 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: Nautikos
Thanks, it is a draft, and probably will remain so.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 15, 2017 at 6:50 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: -blackcat
Thanks. I don't usually post skeletons...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 15, 2017 at 6:49 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 15, 2017 at 6:48 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: FSI
Yes.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 15, 2017 at 6:48 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: Draft - C_C_T
Thanks.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 15, 2017 at 6:48 PM
| link to this | reply
RP
Parts of it are very powerful...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 15, 2017 at 6:28 PM
| link to this | reply
it's really good... painful.
posted by
-blackcat
on July 15, 2017 at 6:08 PM
| link to this | reply
posted by
Kabu
on July 15, 2017 at 11:29 AM
| link to this | reply
It does stink when that happens.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 15, 2017 at 9:39 AM
| link to this | reply
Draft
Yes guys its rough but good enough
It is a pain but there again
I'll cut some slack and soon come back.
As warm as toast, and kind to most.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 15, 2017 at 6:58 AM
| link to this | reply
Re: Hello Brother Aba
Thank you, you are correct in all that you say. It is so.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 14, 2017 at 9:40 PM
| link to this | reply
Hello sister Presta
'The pain is mine to feel, too real.' I can understand the helplessness of it all, and this is universal to everone's experience as there are situations when one can only sympathize, do nothing.
posted by
anib
on July 14, 2017 at 9:32 PM
| link to this | reply