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Re: WileyJohn

Glad you found it to be pleasing, Wiley. Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 30, 2017 at 8:45 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Yes, guess so. Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 30, 2017 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Lanetay

I'd love to, but they elude me... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 30, 2017 at 8:43 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Loved that with it,s "gentle touch of grace" love.

posted by WileyJohn on July 29, 2017 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

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posted by BC-A on July 29, 2017 at 10:08 AM | link to this | reply

please send the gods my way

posted by Lanetay on July 29, 2017 at 9:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

An excellent call there, Naut! I suppose I could uncork something for Bacchus...or host a little get-together in their honor to appease those offended. (I suddenly thought of when my daughters used to go to toga parties in college! What a visual!) LOL! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 28, 2017 at 10:37 PM | link to this | reply

Re: WileyJohn

Wiley, you are just so kind. Many thanks to you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 28, 2017 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Yeah, perhaps I got a bit forward with the gods there. We Italians can get a bit strong in our verbiage at times...

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 28, 2017 at 10:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

I can just about bet my ancient Greco-Roman ancestors most certainly believed, assuming that's what they were... Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 28, 2017 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Thank you. I did try with them. We earthlings tend to forget ourselves with the gods at times... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 28, 2017 at 10:10 PM | link to this | reply

RP

My admittedly limited familiarity with those folks suggests to me they're capricious and easily offended. You might want to offer them a small sacrifice or at least the whiff of some incense in the hope of forgiveness...

posted by Nautikos on July 28, 2017 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

A lovely gentle request, nice poetry love

posted by WileyJohn on July 28, 2017 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply

The amount of strength in your poem on the part of the speaker strikes me most.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 28, 2017 at 9:12 AM | link to this | reply

Well I hope they do not take umbrage, I have sent a quick message saying you were under the influence of a poetical power. I am sure they will grant your benevolence to those who believe. A cute little poem though for Earth folk.

posted by C_C_T on July 28, 2017 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

I love it. A poke and a prod and a beseech even, something one does when they look around the hospital room before they go home after a shift...sort of feeling guilty.

posted by Kabu on July 28, 2017 at 5:17 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba Brother

So kindly put, and well-spoken. I do thank you dear Aba bro.. Yes, perhaps they do need that. But it is meant to be light. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 27, 2017 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

Big sis Prest

A prayer in anger and helplessness. The gods too need to be poked and provoked to do more than just smile, at least His touch of benevolence can melt souls by its warm assurance that He is there always to look after us. Very well said, sis. 

posted by anib on July 27, 2017 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply