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Re: Nautikos

No worries, Naut! I have the same problem. You can't begin to imagine how many times I have been embarrassed by that 'thing' writing words I never intended, and then sending them off to people. I can only imagine what they must think... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 1, 2017 at 9:16 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Well, Naut, it is from very deep in The Vault. And it's perfectly fine if you find little to add or not (though you did, and I thank you, and, it makes perfect sense). I'm just glad you stopped by to comment. Many thanks. I appreciate it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 1, 2017 at 9:14 PM | link to this | reply

RP

This thing I'm using puts words in my fingers that are often wrong! Of course it's my fault that I don't check before pressing the button....

posted by Nautikos on August 1, 2017 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

RP

The others have already covered things so well, there is little to add. But it did occur to me this poem speaks is a young, budding relationship...

posted by Nautikos on August 1, 2017 at 8:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Hi there, Kabu dear, S.Sister! For sure. Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 1, 2017 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

S. Sisters for sure, no doubts in my mind. 

posted by Kabu on August 1, 2017 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: WileyJohn

Thanks, Wiley! Perhaps I have a bit of that in me...   Say hi to Dear Kabu for me; I haven't seen her around my Blogitsville house lately. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 1, 2017 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

Re: fSI

i am glad to hear it, FSI. Not all agree perhaps. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 1, 2017 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Wow! A wonderful 5-star answer, CC. That's a very sweet and magical thing to say to someone and a great answer. I'll bet the ladies really enjoy your company.  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 1, 2017 at 6:17 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

I think you are a free loving Spirit love.

posted by WileyJohn on August 1, 2017 at 3:44 PM | link to this | reply

The free spirits are wonderful people.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 1, 2017 at 10:05 AM | link to this | reply

A good job he gave a soothing answer. Of course I might have said one in a million

posted by C_C_T on August 1, 2017 at 6:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Aba, brother

ThanKS, and I am on meds. I cam a today to just take a class I had to miss yesterday. Think it'll take 4 or 5 days for the viral to leave me free. 

posted by anib on August 1, 2017 at 12:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba, brother

That is a good and correct take on it, for one cannot argue with the truth, and win! LOL! Kudos to you. Hope you are feeling better.  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 31, 2017 at 10:43 PM | link to this | reply

A vaulting poem indeed, dear sis

What I liked about the poem was that it begins with a question in exasperation, 'what do you think I am', probably not expecting from him  the answer, 'a free spirit like I am'. Her breakng into a near smile in exhaled silence is indicative of her joyous happiness at the spontaneous reply which must have floored her, and she instinctively knew he spoke the truth. When there are no two opinions, it it becomes united in undisputed harmony. That is my take on this. 

 

 

posted by anib on July 31, 2017 at 10:15 PM | link to this | reply