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Re: Nautikos

Thank you very much, Naut, for your comments. They are always appreciated. Yes, the poem did come out that way, since it started differently perhaps. Oh, and I am of the same opinion of Wolfie. Not at all my cuppa...

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 15, 2017 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

RP

A multifaceted poem that allows for a variety of interpretations. Oh, and I have no use for Wolfie! When he is (supposedly!) interviewing people, he has this nasty habit of inflicting his half-baked monologues on them, and on us of course...

posted by Nautikos on August 15, 2017 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS - Good one - hahahaha

NOOOO! I'm happy that he has a spouse - at least for him. LOL! The wolf in this poem need not be a metaphor for a human, rather, it could be a thing - like what some would call evil or disaster or disease. As I said, this poem's original version was different in content and intent, but then it became what I posted, though I kept the line about the wolfie. A disservice to wolfies, perhaps...

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 14, 2017 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply

This Wolf? But he has a spouse. LOL

Interesting and descriptive poem.

posted by TAPS. on August 14, 2017 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Thank you, dear Kabu. I tried to go simple and short. LOL. This actually began as another poem along a different line, but ended up this way. Thank you for your kind comments, I always appreciate them. Living 33 minutes from a wild missle shot is, at this time, a bit unsettling.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 14, 2017 at 4:28 PM | link to this | reply

Bleak reality Oh but i love the simplistice horror of it everything not said is said. Congratulations dear S. Sister.

posted by Kabu on August 14, 2017 at 4:24 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Thank you, Bill.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 14, 2017 at 2:58 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Let's just hope it doesn't strike home! :) I think the market's back up now. Probably investors don't read poetic attempts. LOL!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 14, 2017 at 2:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

That is it, perhaps. Thank you, FSI.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 14, 2017 at 2:54 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

I love surealism love.

posted by BC-A on August 14, 2017 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

I guess it strikes home somewhat, did you know the stock market dropped heavily because of your poem. Well possibly.

posted by C_C_T on August 14, 2017 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

What an intense scene that you have described for us.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 14, 2017 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba Brother

A wolf in the wilderness is often misunderstood. They are, indeed fascinating creatures. It's a good animal to be, if one is going to be an animal. lol. This wolf is, of course, a metaphor. Thank you so much, Aba bro. Be well.