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Re: Pat_B
Hello Pat! welcome. How nice to see your comment. I like that; '...a sip of sweetness...' Thank you very much.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 3, 2017 at 3:15 PM
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Nice work! Truth and a sip of sweetness...
posted by
Pat_B
on September 3, 2017 at 4:50 AM
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Re: FSI
Yes, it is a nice thing. Thank you, FSI.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 2, 2017 at 7:03 PM
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Re: Corbin Dallas
Hi, Corbin! Thank you so much, and I'm very glad that you enjoyed it.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 2, 2017 at 7:03 PM
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Re: C_C_T
Thanks, CC. I do like it better, but still, it could use a bit here and there. I thought it would be a breeze to 'fix' it, but it was a little more than that.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 2, 2017 at 7:01 PM
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Re: Kabu
How sweet! Yes, me too! It would be great! Too bad you live so far away. What a chat that would be... 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 2, 2017 at 6:59 PM
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This somehow really makes me want to reach across the space between us, and have that marathon chat.
posted by
Kabu
on September 2, 2017 at 6:23 PM
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It is nice when a spark keeps on going.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 2, 2017 at 10:09 AM
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I really like it......
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on September 2, 2017 at 6:18 AM
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A really good play on words, I hope you are pleased with the result, I would be.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 2, 2017 at 3:26 AM
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To All - Just FYI
I used '...on the edge of Time...' intentionally here, perceiving Time to be a physical entity, as is a cliff.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 2, 2017 at 1:12 AM
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Re: Spark
Exactly! Some meet at the edge more so than others. And thank you so very much. This was an edit. Did you know (of course not) that I had a poster of a picture of Einstein hanging on the wall at my place of work for years and years? I am notorious for having no sense of Time, at times. Time and place, of course, but Time, no way. LOL! We could all think like Einstein if only we took the time to learn, I think...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 2, 2017 at 12:13 AM
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Spark
We ALL meet at the edge of time. Time is not, until we exist at its moment. If only we could think like Einstein. Love the dimensional aspect!
posted by
JessieE
on September 1, 2017 at 10:31 PM
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Re: Oh brother Aba
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that it flowed in a proper sequence to make sense. Sometimes I review my old poems and see much room for improvement. Today I felt like working on this one. Thank you because your reaction shows it helped to do a rewrite. I appreciate it. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 1, 2017 at 10:13 PM
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Oh dear sister Presta
This is simply remarkable, written with great fervour. I love poems that proceed in a fine sequence from one line to the other, from one thought to another. It's the weave into a fine fabric of the central idea that attracts me so much. Exceedingly well done and Kudos! 
posted by
anib
on September 1, 2017 at 8:54 PM
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