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Re: BC-A
Surreal reality! Wow! Yes, that can happen. Thank you. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 23, 2017 at 7:37 PM
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Re: FSI
You're right. Not always easy.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 23, 2017 at 7:36 PM
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Awesome emotional personal analysis. Sureal reality about oneself. Consider it. Oh, wow.
posted by
BC-A
on October 23, 2017 at 4:25 PM
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It can be tough to express those feelings into words.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 23, 2017 at 9:10 AM
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Re: Re: Re: CCT - forgot
RP I think I am more of a word shifter.You were an undiscoverd blossom,though you may not feel like one.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 23, 2017 at 7:22 AM
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Re: Re: CCT - forgot
You are quite an accomplished poet, yourself. Must be all those roses...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 23, 2017 at 1:52 AM
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Re: CCT
Ah, yes, I understand. As I said, I drive my sister nuts if I speak like this. All I'm saying is sometimes a poet can't ponder everything all the time, because there are not always answers - as a poet. Which is not to say one can't write good poetry without answers! There I go again... LOL. Thank you so much, still, I would rather deadhead roses than be a surgeon!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 23, 2017 at 1:42 AM
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Well RP I had to think about this, but of course you are like a surgeon at times sparingly removing unnecessary implications. I can only think it is like pruning a rose and leaving the delicate flowers. Well done.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 23, 2017 at 1:00 AM
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adnohr
Exactly! Nor I! That's precisely why I wrote it. I smile. You read it right! See my comment to Kabu, if you have the time, please. Thank you, adnohr.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 23, 2017 at 12:10 AM
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No thank you, not for me. Excellent poem, but reading it made me shudder, so certainly wouldn't want to be trapped there.
posted by
adnohr
on October 23, 2017 at 12:02 AM
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Re: Re: Re: Lovely,
No, you don't sound preachy at all. Thank you for delving into the spirit of the poem. When I speak in the style in which this poem is written, it drives my sister crazy! LOL! Then we laugh. So glad your celebrations were wonderful and you enjoyed with S. and wife. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 22, 2017 at 10:16 PM
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Re: Re: Lovely,
I have this habit of delving into the spirit of a poem, and I could make out that the thought process led you from one to another, and that's how integration automatically comes weaving themselves into a fine tapestry of dea or feeling. It tells the reader with what sincerity and integrity you are driving home a point. Oh, I must now stop, I tend often to sound preachy. Yes we did enjoy the Diwali celebrations to its fullest. I have a wide range of friend-circle, so food and drinks were aplenty, at each one's home with their families. Siddhartha and his wife also joined in. 
posted by
anib
on October 22, 2017 at 10:10 PM
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Re: Lovely,
Thank you so very much. I'm thrilled you like it. I started it out simply and progressed deeper into the thought process of the concept. Your comments are very much welcomed, brother, and I do hope you and your family enjoyed the Diwali celebrations. I'll bet they were beautiful. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 22, 2017 at 9:52 PM
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Lovely,
'esoteric borders of the arcane', Wow, that is deep, especially preceded by that 'one may never cross'. Loved the look, the style, and the word-arrangement of the poem. That is so like my dear big sis
posted by
anib
on October 22, 2017 at 9:15 PM
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Re: Kabu
Darlin, your words do appear on the screen like magic, and your poetry is beautiful, and you can say, "Wow, I didn't know that was in me," in all that you write. Your muse hasn't gone off; I do believe Sir Wiley is your muse and he is with you forever.
This is a piece where I was playing around. I thought of poets (not here in Blogitsville and some not alive for a long while) who pondered everything from the world situation to angel wings, and at times it futile as a poet to try to find answers to all things. Thank you, dear Kabu, poetess and author.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 22, 2017 at 7:19 PM
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just what i know about my poetry. If the words don't appear on the screne like magic so that I look up and say Wow, i didn't know that was in me. Then it won't be worth keeping. These days my muse has gone off somewhere.
posted by
Kabu
on October 22, 2017 at 4:18 PM
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