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- Go to Now For Something Completely Different - W/ a Nod to Monty Python
Yes, very believable, One feels assured this is a happily ever after!
posted by
Kabu
on April 11, 2025 at 10:52 AM
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Re: Pat
Thank you. One of the hardest things for ME to do is write a ton of dialogue, as I did in this story. It takes a lot to avoid the 'he said/she said/he said' stuff, and at times, you have to hope the reader is following the story close enough to realize who is speaking. I try to 're-orientate' the reader every fourth or fifth exchange, but it can get old.
This story is finished, and as I recall, it ended up with about 18,500 words. It will be part of a collection of five or six short stories.
Thanks for checking it out!
V
posted by
BigV
on April 11, 2025 at 8:03 AM
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Well done. I believed it. Thank you.
posted by
Pat_B
on April 11, 2025 at 7:50 AM
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