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Sunday, February 4, 2007

Hatred

Hatred 5/2/07 They were screaming at me hating me for loving you. I salvaged our love from the grave that is the past. And the voices hated me. They threatened to ostracize me to heap shame upon me beat me to a pulp then ignore my dying form. The voices have quieted a little. They mostly offer... Sign in to see full entry.

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Saturday, February 3, 2007

Bridges

Bridges 4/2/07 I'm losing the battle I know I would kiss you if given half the chance. I would taste you all the while knowing it would burn my bridges I care only for the bridge that brings me to you. Does that not entice you...? Does it mean nothing? Sign in to see full entry.

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Commentary on style

I sometimes wish I had a more "flowery" style. Many of my oldest poems did. And they sorta came out like that. That's the same for all of my poetry, actually. I don't spend lots of time on them, so if they are rhyme, it's because that's how the words came out in my mind at the time. Yes, I realize... Sign in to see full entry.

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Devotion

It’s not about love, it’s about devotion. I do not doubt your love but I doubt your devotion. Devotion is love in action. We will not answer all quandries here. We cannot tidy all things in this mess. But I do know that your abstract love is not enough. Sign in to see full entry.

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Friday, February 2, 2007

Miner

Miner 20/8/06 Digging for Buried treasure Looking for the deeper meaning Your deeper emotions Your edifice does not betray. Looking and looking Keep digging, Attempting, Reaching, Approaching at every angle. Standing at the coalface Finally And there’s nothing. Nothing of you Nothing here A voided... Sign in to see full entry.

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Wrong

Wrong 2/2/07 Yes, it’s wrong to stay with our partners. Yes, it’s wrong, because our passion is for each other. So… you leave first. Sign in to see full entry.

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Lost

Lost 12/10/2005 Lives diverged Opportunities lost Frozen roses, Which never bloomed. I think, I wonder My eyes search for more More of your words More of you. More meaning. How do I go through this And to the other side? How do I think of you and not yearn for the opportunity lost... Without running... Sign in to see full entry.

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Thursday, February 1, 2007

Poem: A call

A call 22/9/06 Feverish I wake in the night My chest heaving, awaking in a sweat My body bolts upright In a bed I imagine you to be With me My brain infected with you This virus courses through my veins I send a psychic signal Fate works its magic You appear You who I have longed for Please… Don’t... Sign in to see full entry.

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Poem: Not a critic

Or at least this is what I try not to be. Not a critic 11/9/06 I’m a producer Not a critic I’m an appreciator Not a critic I’m a creator Not a critic Sign in to see full entry.

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Poem: Avalanche

Avalanche 26/8/06 This levee Will break Barriers will be torn asunder Our will Shall not be denied Passion Creates its own justification. Sign in to see full entry.

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Poetry intended to relieve the dissonance in my head and my heart, but meant to be read by others, as poetry just for myself isn't cutting it for me anymore. I'm taking the plunge, and looking for feedback. And wondering if there's anybody out there.

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