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Marie, I sincerely feel your pain. Am I out of line asking where this came
from? If you go to Dave's Poetic Meanderings and go back a couple pages, read "All Alone" and the sequel 30 years later "Still Lonely" I think we share this emotion!
posted by
swftfox
on July 10, 2006 at 10:05 AM
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thank you everyone.
I was not sure about this one, thought you might find it boring.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 9, 2006 at 2:51 PM
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marieclare, lovely. This poem grabs the reader and makes one feel that they want to help you find an answer and then toward the end, finally realize that you are finding the answer for yourself.
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TAPS.
on July 9, 2006 at 8:47 AM
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 9, 2006 at 7:07 AM
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"Keep the Hope tight"& deliver beautiful memories in your own words, Brava!
The fire imagery is brilliant and so effective that a reader sees each flicker, each log, and when it eats the log with its scrumptious appetite. Your writing will save you--as it has many before us. Share the meories, regrest and skills -- we all do in one way or another. When we stop, we die! p-e-a-c-e&p-o-e-t-r-y
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 9, 2006 at 6:54 AM
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Beautiful words
poignant
posted by
Azur
on July 9, 2006 at 12:48 AM
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